Wednesday, June 22, 2011

LOVE IS OUCH (Siyete)

Huling dumating sa venue si James at Devon at nabigla ang lahat ng Makita kung sino ang kasama ng isa..Si James na palaging dumadalo na mag-isa at si Devon na palaging si Ivan ang laging escort...Pero ngayon ang dalawa ang magkasama..Kita sa mukha ng mga kalalakihan na naroon ang inggit sa sitwasyon ni James at ganun din sa kababaihan para sa sitwasyon ni Devon..nagfiesta ang mga reporters..nagkagulo sa bagong scope na siguradong patok at pag-aagawan ng kahit anong network..bakit hindi kung ang dalawa ang pinaka sikat at indemand sa henerasyong nila at sa kanikanilang larangan..Hindi makapaniwala ang mga kaibigan nila sa kanilang nakita...

Yen: OMG..OMG.OMG..James Reid right? Bulong nito kay Elle na nanlalaki din ang mga at di makapaniwala...
Elle: yes..(yun lang nasabi at nakatingin lang sa bagong dating na magkapareha..good thing may dalawang bakante sa tabi nila)

(Pat’s POV)
What?! Magkakilala sila?wow..akala ko may chance na ako..wala pa rin pala..bakit ganun Dee..pero I’m glad na Masaya ka..wag ka lang niyang sasaktan..

Nakaupo na ang dalawa katabi ng mga kaibigan ni Devon at tila may sariling mundo kung makapagkulitan tila wala ng bukas at di pansin ang mga mata at camerang nakatutok sa bawat galaw nila..at ang mga hiyas na naroon at kitang kita ang mga kaganapan ay hyper confirmed Jaevon is Real..tulad ng mga nasa Pex..twitter..FB..nag-aabang ng update na agad naman pinapadala ng mga naroon partey partey ang mga ito..nagsisigulongan ang mga nasa mansion sa bawat update na natatanggap..hanggang sa tawagin ang pangalan ni Devon para sa best actress...sigawan, hiyawan palakpakan ang mga naroon..expected na ng lahat na si Devon ang tatanghalin na Best actress pero hindi ang dalaga..dahil kahit kelan di siya nag-expect..Kaya nung Tawagin siya di niya mapaniwalaan yun..tiningnan ang mga kaibigan niyakap ang mga ito at huli si James..nagyakapan ang dalawa na tila nasa bahay bakasyunan parin..lahat nabigla sa sumunod na kaganapan..James and Devon kissed...waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hiyawan ang mga Hiyas na naroon ...isang mabilis na kiss pero nagmarka sa dalawa..kahit si Devon di makapaniwala..at ang James tila nasa alapaap kung panaginip lang to ayaw na niyang magising.. habang ang mga taong malapit sa dalawa ay tila nahilo walang may nakapagsalita..it was fast indeed pero parang slowmo at kitang kita nila ng maglapat ang labi ng dalawa..lahat maliban sa Hiyas na naroon ay nakanganga at di pa rin makabawi kahit ang MC ay hindi muna na nakapag salita...

(Devon’s POV)

Hindi ko alam kung paanong biglang naglapat ang mga labi namin..yes I have been kissed a lot in my movies and teleserye but I have never been kissed for real and it doesn’t felt this way..after we hugged and let me looked in his eyes I felt passion and love radiating ..like there’s a magnet that pulling me to where there’s only me and him then I felt his lips and I felt my eyes voluntarily closed as it feels the tingling senasation of a sweet electrifiying that gives shivers down to my spine and never want to let go and end that moment..too early but yes..I am endeed inlove with my J for just a short span of time..he stole my heart without me even knowing it..I just did...hope you love me too J..then I heard scream and gasps..and that brokes the magic I wanted to live for the rest of my life...

(James POV)

I was just looking my M as I watch her giving warm hugs to his friends including the two people who hurt her and I felt sting of pain deep within me when I saw her hugged him..a tear almost scape in my eye..but then when she turn to face me and hugged me tight like there’s only the two of us I grabbed the opportunity of holding our embrace tight..yes I don’t want to let go of her ..letting her feel the love that is unsaid ..unsaid coz I know that she’s still hurting..that she still loves him..I don’t want her to get confuse and more I don’t want to lose her...then I looked in her eyes revealing every emotions that I have within me for years emotions that had grown deeper when I get to know her personally and be with her without a word..we stared..something I can’t explain like magnetic power pulling me towards her inviting lips and when I inhaled the applesweet breath from her mouth I can no longer hold back and crossed the last straw then I captured her lips..sweeter than I ever imagined..I’ve already forgotten where we are..enjoying the sweetest bliss she let me when she responded...and it gives me hopes..I love her so much that I’m willing to wait for her to have herself back first..before asking her but now that she let me kissed her..I’ m claiming her..she’s mine..yes she is mine..I was in that trance of magical dream when I heard scream and gasp..that makes me open my eyes...I looked at her again she’s really beautiful still eyes closed I intertwined our hands and waited for her to open her eyes....


Hinatid ni James si Devon papunta sa stage..pero di siya umakyat nag-abang lang siya sa baba..
Devon: ahm..wow..thank you for this(itinaas ang trophy nakangiti na saad nito)para to sa lahat ng nagmamahal sa akin..sa friends ko..sa family ko..sa fans ko..sa staff and crew..kay derik at sa mga co-actor ko..at most especially kay GOD..thank You LORD sa lahat ng bLessings..inilibot ang paningin sa mga fans naroon at nakita niya ang isang malaking tarpaulin binasa niya ito Jaevon?at nakita niya ang picture niya at ni James..wow may fans pala kami..natawa at kumaway ito sa mga hiyas saka hinanap ng mga mata ang isang taong naging lakas at nagbibigay sa kaniya ng saya..isang tao na totoong nagdudulot ng pagbilis ng tibok ng puso niya)at sa isang especial na tao..J para din sayo to.. hiyawan ang mga naroon..lalo na ang mga hiyas..kasi alam ng mga ito kung sino si J..courtesy of PorkOrange alam ng mga hiyas ang petname ng bawat isa..




(honestly I don't know if this is good or what..sorry..)but am still hoping that u'd still give your love on this chappie..I'm having hard time making chapz due to luck of time and ideas maybe..hehehhhehe

15 comments:

  1. tyeeeeeet NAIIHI naman ako sa chapters na 2! grabe feel na feel ko ang kiss. its MAGICAL!!! ayieeeeeee

    waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

    mare HangGanda. nakakakilig as in! as usual super bow sa galing mong mag-isip. grabe nakakatuwa kase naman andun ako sa part nang GEMS na naghuhumiyaw lol.

    anubeh mare hindi mo kami dinidisappoint sa pag-antay namin nang next chappie. as in KAKAKILIG pa din.

    mare next chapters na. da best ka talaga.

    -jk022509

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  2. wwwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

    grabe ang chappie na to, hindi ako makahinga naubusan ako ng oxygems, hindi ko napaghandaan, grabeh talaga

    isa pa para makahinga na ko
    wwwwwwwwwwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

    nagkiss talaga si J at M, grabe sasabog na ang dibdib ko sa kilig, prang yung naramdaman ko lang nung sunday :)

    M: I am indeed inlove with my J for just a short span of time..he stole my heart without me even knowing it

    so happy na narealize na din ni M na mahal nya si J, dont worry M mahal na mahal ka ng amo kong gwapo lol f na f ko lol

    D: I’ m claiming her..she’s mine..yes she is mine..

    tama yan boss!!! haranahin mo na :) lol

    hanggaling mo talaga ate ayen
    your the best *okay*

    - JECK / PORKORANGE

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  3. waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa





    tiyet uber uber kilig....di ko expect ang kisssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss




    tiyet tiyet....





    more more more kisssssssssss...hahahahahaha






    update ka agad te.... :D














    mwauaaahhh wabyu....

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  4. gondo teh!.........nag nose bleed aq...hahahaha pwo all in all ang GANDA!........pasigaw waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh


    _di aq maka get over sa kissing scene nla kahit mabilisan lang pwo feel na feel naman nila eh.....waaaaaaaaaaaaaa nuh bey kinilig aq!.....moooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrreeee

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  5. ate ayeeen. gustu mo latigo 100x?? anung di maganda?. HANGGANDA KAYA..di namin ini expect ang kiss nayun at ang pag ariba ng mga "hiyas"

    waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa..

    yung feeling ko same feeling ko nung kumanta si spens ng harana keh betchay kahit tirik na tirik ang araw.

    wala na akong masabi sa sobrang ganda. basta ang alam ko KINILIG AKOOOO.

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  6. waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa




    ang galing galing mo ate Ayen!!! handsdown!! IDOL!! waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

    kinikilig ako, can't wait for the next chapies..


    anong twist and turns kaya ang mga magaganap? waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa


    kinikilig ako! as in todo todo!! xD

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  7. omg...psigaw din,. Whaaaaaaaaa...they kissed.. Nkngiti n lng me hbng binbsa 2...grabe, kkilig...thumbs up tlg ms ayen..ano ky mangyayari since d whole thing was captured by d media..my add ky charactr n mtgl n ring my hidden desire k j or manggu2lo c ivan.. Exciting tlg..prng nxt epi lng ng GV n kaabng-abang..hehe.,. Casey here...

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  8. HUmaygawwd!! I've got 2 words for this Chapter Ate Ayen..... " LOVE IT!! " : )

    Naks..unexpected yung KISS ha..hehehe...I so love the POV or mind script of J & M...vakit pa ksi di na lang nila totohanin at ipagsigawan yung nararamdaman nila sa isa't-isa eh alam naman ng mga JaEvon Gems yung totoo.

    Teka if they tell each other how they truly feel ay wala nang kuwento si Ikaw...hahahaha..Kaya hayaan na lang kita Ate Ayen mag-kuwento..*gulong-gulong*

    Mind you..if both J & M don't verbalize their true feelings for each other ay baka maulit lang yung ginawa ni Koya Ivan..hmmmm????

    Teka..ikaw yung story teller, hindi ako...hahaha...

    PAsigaw na lang tulad ng mga H diyeen sa taas..

    WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH

    WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

    WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

    WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!

    Okies clear na....

    Again " Love IT!! "

    P.S. Ate Ayen, na-4ward ka hin message hak ha text just to let me know na may ff-up chapter ka na...hehehe..Am I right or AM I left?? *glee*

    Sige na isulod na Miss V ha im kuwento...hahaha.

    Take Care Te Ayen.. : )God Bless...

    Puyde bak mamatron ha iyo??? lol

    Okies..vavuzkissh.. : )

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  9. speechless.............................
    thumbs-up!!

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  10. Mareng Ayen super ganda promiseeeeeeeeeeeee...next chap na agad lol...sowe ha, d aq excited eh lol...

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  11. I love this chapter super kilig not only this chapter pero simula chapter 1 ngayon lang ako nagcomment kasi nirush ko ang pagbabasa simula sa chapter 1 kasi ngayon lang ako may free time :)). Waaaaa Ate Ayen ang galing niyo po tumitili talaga ako sa room ko sa kilig. waaaaaah Next chapter na po pls. Excited lang waaaaah :"> :"> :))-Blae

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  12. next chaP na po pls....

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  13. Nice one superferry text me kung may chapter 8

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  14. waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa... super abangers po kami sa kasunod na chapter nito ms.writer..sana po mapagbigyan nyo kami:) may POV po ba si ayven after the kissing scene of M and J?..ayieeee..kkakilig aman po talaga..

    ~ladyinfenk_5166

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  15. WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

    TYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEETTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT

    MARENG AYEN NAIIHI AKO

    HINDI KO INEXPECT NA IKIKISS AKO NI JAMES
    WALA AKONG SUOT NA CATHETER LOL

    P: I am endeed inlove with my J for just a short span of time..he stole my heart without me even knowing it

    J: .I’ m claiming her..she’s mine..yes she is mine.



    TYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEETTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT JAMES DIKO NA KINAKAYA TOH

    NILALANGGAM NA TAYO


    THANKS AYEN FOR THIS CHAPTER DI MAWALA ANG NGITI SA LABI KO



    IKAW NA IKAW NA ANG MAGALING MAGSULAT


    HANGEL PEACHY :STOLENKISS:

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