Sunday, June 26, 2011

Devon's wrath(oneshot)

Masayang nag-uusap sina Elle at Auriette sa bahay ng huli ng biglang tumabi si Devon na inis na inis..

Hey anong problema Devs ba't busangot ka dyan?tanong ni Elle


He will really get it from me Elle" sagot ni Devon

Huh?! sino? at bakit"natatakang tanong ni Auriette

The nerve..Inis na saad nito saka nagpaalam sa mga kaibigan na mauuna na..

Nagtataka ang dalawang kaibigan naiwan saka nagkatinginan at nakita nila na naiwan ng dalaga ang laptop nito..at doon nakita nila ang isang news at picture ni James na kasama ang isang ding singer gaya nito..and what shocks them is its like they're having a good time, James hand were on the girls waist..

This is trouble"saad ni elle

yes indeed it is" kinkabahan na saad nito para boyfriend ng kaibigan..

Bakit?

Ok, Devon is such a sweet girl, bubbly and a very understanding person..but..yes but..don't try to piss her off coz what you see isn't always what you get, she may smile at you but deep within she's plotting on how to get back on you..they have been witnessed the Devon's wrath..there was this one time that Joe along with there group of friends tried to give pranks on her..it was just ok actually but Joe made it too far that makes Devon felt embarrassed..Joe not knowing of the crime he committed and oblivious to what's gonna happen tried to get some popcorn on Devon's care and one big scream were heard over the rehearsal room..well Devon put a mouse trap inside the empty popcorn box..see no one expected it not even us...


ASAP


No Devz I cant and I will not do that.." Quin refused

Please..buddy tayo diba?'' nagpapacute na saad ni Devon

No Devz. kilala ko si James..he will kill me if I do that

ohw ok, i'll kill you my self nalang kaya.."nakataas ang kilay na saad nito

fine..fine.."arghh I hate it..I will be killed either way..hush...but sometimes it is really good to let him felt it..evil smirk..


James, Pat, Joe and Ryan were having fan..while waiting for the ASAP to start, they were drag by no other than James to watch it since they don't have an schedule...hmmm why? because her baby will perform being a mainstay of the said program..nasa location sila kung saan may movie silang ginagawa free sila sa araw na yun but since malayo at kinabukasan eh sasabak na naman sa shooting di na sila bumalik ng manila

Excited si James na makita kahit sa TV lang si Devon, madalaas di na sila nagkikita dahil pinafucos siya sa pagkanta ng ABS though minsan umaarte siya..unlike Devon na halos lahat yata ng talento eh ibinigay sa kaniya at mahirap balewalain dahil indemand ngayon ang dalaga..madalas pag libre siya ito ang hindi pwede at vice versa


Nagtatawanan ang apat sa mga nakikita nilang antics ng mga kaibigan din nilang artist..miss na din nila ang mag guest sa asap especially James dahiil two months itong nagconcert tour at pagkabalik niya agad siyang sumabak sa Movie kung saan kasama niya ang 3 sa mga bestfriend niya mula sa PBB...at biglang natahimik ang apat ng tawagin ang pangalan ni Devon para sumayaw..kasama si Quin bilang kapareha nito( isipin niyo nalang ang crawl ok)solo ng dalawa yung stage..both of them give it all..

At hindi makapaniwala si James sa nakikita niya..Quin is definetly touching his baby..

biglang sumigaw si Ryan..

allaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy"crap ako na naman'

napatingin ang dalawa sa sumigaw at kitang kita nila na namumula ang braso ng kawawa nilang kaibigan sa higpit ng hawak ni James dito..agad napaatras ang dalawa..

oh no not again" bulong ni Pat kay Joe

anong not again ka jan tingnan mo o nangyayari na eh" sagot nito



bilis tawagan mo si Devz" saad ni Pat


sira ka ba panu ko matatawagan eh tingnan mo o sumasayaw..oh holy crap..he almost touch D's lips..nabigla at nanlaki ang mga mata nito sa nakita sa tv..

lagot trouble ito"saad ni Pat na nanlalaki din ang mga mata..


guys help me..why is it always me'"umiiyak na saad ni Ryan sa mga kaibigan


Hindi umimik ang dalawa tumingin lang sila sa kawawang si Ryan, ayaw nilang madamay ni gumalawa ni hindi nila gumawa..dahil maling kibo nila sigurado sa kanila mababaling ang galit ng selosong kaibigan nila..

Sa garahe sabay sabay na naglalakad si Elle, Devon, Ivan , Quin, Kazel and Ivan..nabigla ang lahat sa nakita nilang imahe,isa sanang magandang imahe kung hindi lang busangot ang mukha..at muntikan mapasaigaw si Quin ng kumilos bigla ang imahe, bakit hindi alam nito siya ang prime suspect..kung sa ibang araw ito posibleng matakot ang dalaga sa mukha at madilim na aura ng bf..pero hindi ito natinag..imbes na matakot ito, nanalilisik ang mga mata na tiningnan ito at nilampasan..

hindi maintindihan kung bakit ganun makatingin ang dalaga sa kaniya...ang kanina madilim na mukha ay nawala at napalitan ng pagkabahala lalo na nung lampasan siya ng dalaga..

baby" maamong tawag nito sa dalaga sabay hawak sa kamay nito

baby your face" asik ng dalaga at tinampal ang kamay na nakahawak sa kaniya

Biglang naguluhan si James..he came all the way from Davao para sana iparamdam sa dalaga na hindi niya nagustuhan ang performance nito at biglang tiningnan ng masama si Quin na biglang nagtago sa likod ni Devon..hindi maintindahn ng binata at ang pinakaayaw niya sa lahat ay ang makita ang mga mata ng dalaga na puno ng galit..galit? ba't ito galit sa kaniya..at walang sabi sabi agad na binuhat ang dalaga patungo sa sasakyan nito..


Don't dare follow us specially you..di pa tayo tapos" saad nito kay quin at sa mga kaibigan..pinpilit na maglakad ng mabilis dahil inaatake siya ng mala pacman na kamay ni Devon

put me down..put me down..don't touch me..ano ba?" galit na galit at naghehesteryang saad ng dalaga sa bf..at di niya na namalayan nasa loob na siya ng sasakyan nito..

baby what's wrong?"nagtatakang saad nito

what's wrong?"tanong dalaga at agad na sinampal ang binta..I hate you..i hate you..

but baby..I really don't understand.."gusto niyang mainis nasampal siya at galit na galit ang dalaga sa kaniya ng di niya alam ang dahilan..

you don't understand? i hate..you didn't bother to call me that your back then i found out you were with her I hate you James..I hate you..just tell me if you don't waant me in you life anymore I'll let you go..just tell me" uumiiyak na saad ni devon..

Hindi nakapagsalita ang binata ang kanina inis na nararamdaman ay biglang napalitan ng tuwa..for the 1st time nakita niya na nagselos ang dalaga sa kaniya..agad na niyakap ang dalaga...

hush baby..I was calling you frequently but were out of coverage and was derictly to your voicemail..and..baby its not what you think, she was with someone else that night..'saad ni James


really, but you were holding her waist..i hate you.."umiiyak pa rin na saad nito


baby,she almost fell down that night I was the nearest one so that's it..natatawa na dahil nagmumukhang bata ang dalaga and he finds it cute..

are you sure?"tanong ng dalaga

yes, but you..you let him touch you..you might even let him kiss you..maktol nito at parang bata na tiningnan ang mga kamay..you know I hate it right..

natawa ang dalaga..

don't be mad on him ok..i Just bribed him.."saad ng dalaga na nakangiti dahil alam niyang nakuha niya yung gusto niya..well miss na niya ang binata..at ito na nga napalitaw niya ito..

but.."di na natapos ng binata ang sasabihin dahil agad na siyang hinalikan ng dalaga..

I miss you babe, hmm don't dare be near on any other girl baby..you know what I mean right?


I promise I won't babe..saka siniil uli ng halik ang dalaga..


Habang sa labas ay naghihintay pa rin ang mga kaibigan na lumabas ang dalawa sa sasakyan..

end..end..end..end..


waley pa ako next chap ng love is ouch so ito na muna pagtiyagaan niyo...

10 comments:

  1. wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa mare u did it again big time tong oneshot mo handsdown ako sayo mare ang galing kulit and super cute ng story...ikaw na mare ikaw na ang the best love you mare godbless...kahit puro one shot mare choks na ehehhe...

    jane (enajyram)

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  2. naman mare HangGanda naman nito.

    waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

    nakaka-inlove talaga ang dalawa na 2 kahit sa FF lang. :D

    i mean magaling kase ang writer kaya naman nakaka-inlove magbasa ng mga stories mo.

    basta mare nakakaalis nang stress. lab you talaga.

    ang selosan moment FTW talaga.

    waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

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  3. SHEMAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!

    akala ko nanonood ako ng pelikula. jusme!
    ate ayen sinabi na nila lahat!. wala na akong masabi. ang masasabi kolang pala ay HANDSDOWN!

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  4. what a short ff ... every detail of the story is so amazing.. i really felt the sincerity of each character.. what if it'll gonna happen in the real world? .. weeeeeee... super kilig!:) im so much in love into this ff... we're looking forward for a new FF .... thanks for this one ate ayen... super #HANDSDOWN .....

    ~ladyinfenk_5166

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  5. tyeeeeeeetttttttt AYENNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!

    another super kilig FF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    ikaw na talaga!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    parang totoo lang!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    cute ng story nito!
    naaawa ako kay Ryan!!!hehehehehe

    MORE TO COME!hehehe

    GOD BLESS U with more bright and kilig ideas!!!!

    nakakawala ng stress mga ganitong stories very light and yet super kilig!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    DAGHANG SALAMAT!!!!!!!mwah!


    laddie

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  6. waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

    Mareng Ayen, super lab ko talaga ang FF mo...as in F n F ko lol...ang ganda...cute...kilig...lahat na...lol

    ikaw ay isang bakulaw na manunulat lol (aiai mode)

    more ff to come :D:D:D

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  7. pasigaw!
    waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

    na sabi na nila lahat eh!....nuh bey!ang ganda talaga habang nagbabasa aq eh nakangiti para na aqng tanga! :)) super ganda!

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  8. wwwwwwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
    aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

    ate ayen ang ganda ng one shot na to

    grabe ang ganda, ang kulit lang magalit ni devon
    at walang kupas magselos ang jaime

    whahaahaha

    abangers ako sa mga susunod mo pang mga gawa :)

    handsdown talaga go sayo

    - JECK

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  9. WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA


    YUN LANG ANG MASASABI KO KASI NAMAN SI JAMES REID HINALIKAN NA NAMAN AKO


    THANKS MARE PWEDE BANG ITULOY MO NA LANG ANG MGA ONESHOT HANGGANDA EH PERO UNAHIN MO MUNA ANG KISS


    HANGEL PEACHY

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  10. love it ate ayen. love ko talaga oneshots mo. hihihi...


    Keep it up! more please ^^

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