Sunday, September 9, 2012

My Ordinary girl 6


Day 6

Dahan dahan na nagmulat ng mga mata ang dalaga           ...

It felt weird “bulong nito sa sarili..

Where is my princess canopy”bulong ulit nito habang nakatingin sa kisame

Oh and it smells masculine” sabay tingin nito sa akala’y unan na mahigpit na niyayakap

Muntikan mapasigaw ang dalaga ng Makita kung ano at sino ito...

How did I get here” bulong nito sa sarili habang dahan dahan na inilalayo ang katawan sa binata
At tinitingnan ang mukha ng nito na wari’y minimemorya

Walang maisip ang dalaga kung ano ang huling  nangyari at panu siya  napunta o kung panu niya nakatabi ang binata sa pagtulog but a glass of milk kung saan nakasanayan na niya bago matulog

Tila malalim pa rin ang iniisip ng dalaga at nakatingin lang sa binata di niya namalayan  na gising nap ala ito at nakatingin din  sa kaniya..

James: don’t play innocent , and cut the act I won’t buy it..

Saad nito sa dalaga na nabigla sa binatang gising nap ala

Devon: oh, your awake..

James: of course I am, stupid, how can a sleep man talk

Mataray na saad nito sa dalaga( suplado ba dapat)

Devon: oh how did, I get here?

Nagtataka pa rin na tanong nito..

James: I told you to cut the act..and you know what, I just wish that you never came back from where  heck you came from..you just ruined everything for me..now move ..I have to freshen up..unless you wanted to go shower w/me..w/c I know you would love right...

Sarkastikong saad ng binata..

Devon can’t believe what she’s hearing..gustong tumulo ng luha niya ngunit pinigilan niya ang sarili, ayaw niyang umiyak sa harap nito,walang may trumato sa kaniya ng ganun..kaya di niya alam kung ano ang pedeng maging reaksyon...walang imik na lumayo ang dalaga sa binata , tumayo at lumabas ng kwarto..
Habang di makapaniwala ang binata sa mga lumabas sa labi niya, he maybe cold and heartless as what the people sees him but he’s human himself, he knows how to respect and all humane thing...but he can’t helped it..the lady wakens the real beast in him..he knows that he is being rude and unfair...but he can’t let it reign..she’s the reason why she can’t totally chase his ordinary girl...
Thank You Roselyne 2 Anonymous , FB LIkers and silent readers
it means so much to me that your giving my works an ample of your time
thank you for liking it, and I am hoping that your looking forward for my next post..

I know that this is update was short still, but this is for you
thank you again, as much as I wanted to post and update daily
I can't since am pretty loaded(BUSY)..

But  I am trying my very best to post a update everytime I got time
and sad to say, yeah it is indeed sad to say that
my free time is only during weekends when I don't have to work overtime
I am actually a Li'l exhausted tonight since my whole afternoon
was spent buying my nieces and nephews things needed @ school
the one I accompany was my niece who lost her mom last  april
due to heart eklabo...

Aigooo I just got this aching, twisting , pricking not just my heart but my mind as well seeing them growing up w/o a mom anymore...


4 comments:

  1. I love all ur ff..sana po dalasan ang pag update
    nang my ordinary girl♥♥♥

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  2. waaaaaaaaaaaa mare kakabitin lang talaga. hahaha

    nemen dapat nitarayan din ni devon si james grrrgrrrr

    kunwari pa tong james na to! tapos maiinlab din :p

    nways, mare love you again and again.

    God Bless!

    -jk022509

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  3. I love your story....kya lng nkakabitin san may update n ulit

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  4. nakuuu tulak ng bibig kabig ng dibdib itong c James hahaha...ipokrito nakuuuu hahaha pero like ko ang takbo ng story lalo n pag ganyang may mga maling akala at sinasaktan ang girl tas in d end marerealize ng boy n mali pala xa den inlab n pla xa hahahaha...

    next chap pls. marami kaming nag-aabang...

    God bless! :)

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